hmmm.... my 1st photography competition entry

well, there is always a 1st time... bt this here is an edited version of my pic.. which i think might look more dramatic after editing it... lol... well,im still trying to learn how to use my slr.. everyday is a day to learn... don't u agree... im welcoming ur comment on my picture and hope tat u can give me sincere advices... appreciated....

taken at a burnt down site...